"He did not have time to worry about style..." No wonder they didn't call him back. He didn't even get to the face-to-face interview and he's already refusing to do what is asked of him? That's a good way not to pass an interview for any profession.
Style is inherent in everything we do. It's not an overlay. It's not an add-on. It's not a perk. It exists whether we use it or not. Things - programs, products, what have you - are not improved upon by style; they are improved upon by having GOOD style (the opposite of which is simply having bad style).
The problem with people who come from a very technically-oriented point of view is that if it's not balanced out by any aesthetic interest or appreciation, it's assumed that "style" is a tool not used by programmers; "style" means "leave it to the UI or marketing guys." It's simply not true. In striving the best at what you do, you have to improve all aspects of the work. That means not just the execution, but the presentation.
Humans are visually-oriented beings. We choose things based on how they look (Pretty girl! Shiny package!).
In clearly announcing that he did not have time for style, he basically gave the impression that he was not the shiny package that Microsoft was shopping for. And through such an obvious pre-apology, he also made his lack of indents and comments more apparent to the evaluator (though I'm sure they wouldn't have hired him for his lack of comments alone).